Fashion - women clothing rental service landing page

Your concept for the fashion rental service landing page is really nice! I love the overall visual design. It's simple, clear, and easy on the eyes.

Here are a few points for improvement:

1. It’s not immediately clear what the service is about. Consider incorporating the word "rent" into the main headline to make it obvious at first glance.

2. In the "How It Works" section, you mention paying the rent but not the pricing plans. Since you do have a pricing plan, it would be good to mention that here.

3. Why is there only one pricing plan? It would be helpful to understand the rationale behind this choice.

4. Proofread the copy for small grammatical inaccuracies to ensure it looks polished and professional.

5. Adding your design rationale would be a great touch. It would be nice to see the thought process behind this design and understand your decisions better.

Overall, you’ve done a great job, and with a few tweaks, it could be even better! Keep up the good work!