YoungSikkim - Web Design

Sunny, while the product video is well-made and engaging, the effort seems misplaced for this context. Instead of showcasing the product itself, focus should have been on presenting the design process, decisions, and challenges. A design presentation would provide more insight into your approach, design thinking, and how you addressed user needs, which is crucial for receiving targeted feedback. Going forward, ensure that your presentations align with the purpose of the review, highlighting the design aspects rather than just the end product.

A small feedback based on the limited info we know about your landing page:

What I noticed:

The hierarchy of the elements could be further emphasized. For instance, the "Read Now," "Dive in," and "Write now" buttons are small and somewhat understated compared to the rest of the content. Increasing their size or adding more contrast could help direct users' attention to these key actions.

The typography is simple and readable, but it lacks visual impact. The main heading, "Welcome to Young Sikkim," could be made bolder or larger to serve as a stronger focal point for the page.

The color scheme is minimalistic, with a consistent use of dark and light tones, which creates a professional appearance.

Consideration: The overall palette could be expanded slightly to introduce more visual interest. For example, incorporating a secondary color that complements the existing scheme could make certain elements, like buttons or links, stand out more.

Ensure that the images are consistent in style and tone to maintain a cohesive look across the page. And I've noticed on some pages the images are distorted so I think frontend needs to fix it.

Keep up the good work!