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I saw a student using headphone so i thought of making a creative landing page for that headphones

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It is good to see how an idea can turn into a design project. This is definitely a good start, but I suggest some improvements.

The 'buy now' CTA evokes urgency by using the color red, but I wouldn't use the red shadow, this doesn't make its edges distinguishable by straining the eyes. Instead, use a darker and lighter shadow to give it more prominence.

Create a hierarchy of text, making the title more bold and the body copyligher, also highlight the size differences more. I would suggest enlarging the texts in general because as they are they are difficult to read (especially the text for the discount).

Delete decorative elements that are not reminiscent of the product, everything must have a motivation.

Lastly, provide a description of your thinking and the process you went through

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The 50% discounts are too small, not able to read

The three bar menu on top left doesn't signal it's use, couldnt it be in the main menu as regular items on desktop?

I don't like the line above the variants.

Make the UI dimmer so that the headphones strike with attention grab.

Apart from that nice visuals.


Well done, certainly you have got off to a great start! I have some suggestions which may help your to improve your design

  • You call to action buttons red glow feels too much! Loose it or add a subtle drop to the button to make it stand out. Maybe consider a different colour choice!
  • Hierarchy and white space - Think about your text hierarchy thinking about font weight and sizings. By also changing this you may be able to bring some more white space into the design to let it breathe.

Keep up the great work and i wish you all the best with the designs development!


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