WanderProfile – Personal Profile & Activity Overview

Hi again Maham 😊

Thanks for sharing your concept and design. The direction you were aiming is clear, and you’ve built a strong storytelling arc that reflects your focus on identity, activity, and financial clarity. That said, I think the execution could be better with some adjustments.

Here are a few observations that could help bring this design to a more polished and consistent level:

• The top section is impactful, with a strong portrait and role tags that add emotional value. However, the leading dot before “Writer • Photographer • Traveler” feels unnecessary; it suggests something is missing on the left. Removing it would help the line feel more balanced. Also, while the serif typography gives a distinct voice to the user’s name, it does compromise legibility. Since this is a profile view that includes financial information, you might consider a cleaner, more neutral typeface to enhance clarity and usability, especially in contexts that relate to money and data.
• Visually, the hierarchy prioritises the photo over the monetary summary, which might not align with how users actually value this information. If I’m viewing my own dashboard, I’d expect the financial summary (especially spending) to be more immediately emphasised than my portrait. Consider elevating the income/spending cards either visually or structurally, perhaps by adjusting their position or making them slightly larger.
• The income and spending cards are nicely styled but seem to use a different shadow treatment compared to the white activity cards below. Because the activity cards have both a visible outline and a soft shadow, they end up feeling like they “float” more than the primary cards above, which can unintentionally suggest reversed importance. A lighter shadow and removal of the outline on the activity cards might make the UI feel more unified.
• There are some inconsistencies in spacing and alignment across the activity cards. The image on the left sits very close to the edge of the card, while there’s more generous padding on top and bottom. Consider equalising this for better spatial balance. Also, the price value on the far right feels too close to the edge, making the card feel unbalanced or weighted to one side. Pulling it in slightly would help reinforce harmony across the design.
• On a smaller but important note, the date format (e.g. 03/02/2025) can be ambiguous depending on the user's locale. To avoid confusion between day/month vs. month/day formats, a clearer version like "02 Mar 2025" would make the experience more universally understandable.

This is a solid direction with unique character, just needs a layer of functional clarity and visual refinement to feel fully ready. Good work! ☺️