Fitness Website Landing Page Copy

Hey Norin, nice work!

The layout is clean, structured, and visually calming overall. One thing that stood out to me is the use of solid black for the main text and CTA. If you're aiming to reduce screen fatigue and promote a sense of tranquility, pure black #000 might feel too harsh on bright backgrounds and could contribute to visual strain over time.

A softened dark tone like #333 or #444 usually offers a better balance while maintaining readability. For example, the CTA uses black text on a vibrant blue button, which feels a bit too intense in an otherwise gentle layout. A white text color might create a more inviting feel, like you used in the “subscribe” button.

I also noticed that each section begins with the same soft pink gradient. While it does help clearly separate content areas, the repetition gives the layout a slide-deck feel rather than a fluid, continuous web experience. If that's not intentional, you might consider softening the transitions or creating more natural visual flow between sections.

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