Onboarding Screen

Hi Ankita!

I really like the visual design, and the graphics add a lot to the onboarding. Well done!

One thing I’d suggest is to pay close attention to your copy. From a UX copywriting perspective, I’d really like to see more consistency.

You mentioned, “We are here to Guide,” with “Guide” capitalized. In the previous screens (1st and 2nd), you mentioned, “We are here to help,” with “help” in lowercase. I suggest sticking to one format.

The same goes for the subtitles. In 2 of the screens, you started with lowercase, and in the other, you started with uppercase. Try to be consistent with your copy.

One tiny detail: in the 3rd screen, as it’s the end of the onboarding, you could replace the arrow icon with a button saying “Complete” or “Finish Onboarding” to highlight the end of the flow.

You've got a good start with the onboarding flow, but there are a few things to consider. Using a walkthrough to explain the app's value proposition is redundant since users who download the app likely already understand its benefits. Instead, it would be more useful to provide an interactive tour of your app’s UI. This can offer contextual and practical guidance, where you can highlight your app's key features.

You might also want to refine your copy to make it more consistent and let your brand tone shine through. Pay attention to capitalization, punctuation, and grammar to ensure everything reads smoothly and professionally.