Lumine Beauty Clinic — Elegant Landing Page Design

Perfect

A very nice presentation of your landing page! I will assess the landing page as is, ignoring the brief for a moment.

The content is well thought out and it really sells the idea of the clinic and its treatments. The images clearly show what the visitor can expect and each image has a happy smiling customer. Also showing an image of the clinicians builds trust and makes it feel more real. The copy clearly states the benefits and uses an aspirational tone such as “Glow Like Never Before — Experience True Beauty”. I am not sure why all the text is in title case but it makes it seem like all the writing is a title. Opt for sentence case to make it easier for the visitor to read. There is a spelling error with says “Tep” instead of “Step” and since this is the landing page its the first impression visitors get so its best to catch these errors ahead of time. The soft lavender colours show off a sophisticated and elegant color palette which matches with the beauty and clinic branding. Be mindful of the colour of the font over the header colour because it might not meet accessibility standards. Also text over overlays of images can be harder to read. Your layout is very consistent with enough white space to make the content breathe, which will make it easy to adapt to mobile or tablet since it’s modular. The call to actions are clear and the user can easily find the button to make an appointment. Nicely done!

I gave 2 claps, because of the feedback mentioned and also because the design deviated from the project brief. I can see you wanted to showcase your creativity, but the brief had the scenario of the pet facility and more importantly to expand reach with a responsive page and this was more focused on a desktop approach. With a few changes to how the content is formatted and a mobile or tablet version as well this could become an excellent case study for your UXCel showcase!