Luma - Wellness for you 🌿✨💆🏻‍♀️

Copy-wise, this is engaging with a clear message and guidance. No confusing sales copy (yet, because there’s always a trade-off with business goals, aha). It really feels like a safe haven for users.

I have an assumption, but I’d like to hear from you, what was the reason for arranging the menu like this: Explore - Plans - Community - About Us? No right or wrong answers, just curious. Also, I noticed that every other copy ends with a period except for the hero text (above the Start free now button). Was that a stylistic choice?

Even though this is a writing-focused task, there’s always a visual design aspect worth considering. Here are a few things I think could be improved:

• Build out the entire landing page from header to footer if possible

• It’s easier to keep elements evenly placed if you use a grid

• The menu could be more centered

• The menu text color could be lighter, so it doesn’t poke at our eyes

• The menu background color could be softened as well, to help the turquoise logo stand out (since that shade is a bit tricky)

• The hero section text alignment feels slightly inconsistent for a left-aligned layout, again, a grid could help

• There’s good text hierarchy in the “Why Luma” section image description, but the heading could be lighter too

Overall, solid direction here. Looking forward to seeing how you evolve it further!