Luce and Bean

The website is beautiful, with a well-chosen color palette, fonts, texts, and imagery. I’ve enjoyed learning about your process in creating it.

However, the submission does not meet the design brief's requirement for a landing page. This distinction is minor but important, as it’s not entirely fair to compare full websites with landing pages.

Additionally, I recommend enhancing the cover image for this submission. Currently, the brand name alone does not provide enough information about what users are reviewing. Given the quality of your work, it deserves more precise and informative presentation through the title and cover image to attract the great feedback it merits.

You've made a good start with your landing page design, and the visual design is truly beautiful. But it looks like your page is functioning more like a homepage right now. Remember, a landing page should focus on one key action you want users to take, like subscribing or buying, without any navigation options that might lead them elsewhere.

Also, the text on the page seems a bit placeholder-ish at the moment. It's a good idea to flesh this out. Think about what you really want your visitors to do and craft your copy to guide them toward that action. Make sure your visuals, text, and calls to action all line up to create a clear, compelling path for users to follow. With these tweaks, your page will look great (it already does), plus it'll be primed to convert visitors into customers!