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Design Scenario

You are a UI designer at a fitness startup, which could be a fitness studio, an online fitness program, or fitness coaching. The company's objective is to convert landing page visitors into loyal customers.

Design Rationale

For the FitFlex app's enhanced landing page, I opted for a subheading and CTA button label that I believed would resonate more deeply with our target audience. My choices were designed to communicate the value and ease of starting with this app, emphasizing the no-commitment, free trial aspect that we offer.

Our target audience is looking for a flexible and commitment-free way to improve their fitness, I tailored the subheading and CTA to reflect these desires. The messaging is designed to appeal to individuals who are motivated to start their fitness journey but are cautious about committing financially or feeling trapped in a subscription model. It’s hard to know where to get started on this fitness journey and it will make it easier for people to get started on the right path by removing this initial barrier of entry. This strategy is based on the principle that once users experience the value of our app firsthand, they're more likely to convert to paying subscribers.

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You did a good job tailoring the messaging to resonate with the target audience's desire for flexibility and commitment-free fitness options. I think the emphasis on the no-commitment and the free trial can be a smart strategy.

While the concept is strong, there are some areas where improvements could be made in the design execution. There seem to be misalignments on the page regarding content and design elements and the visual hierarchy is not as clear as it could be to me. The presence of multiple bold titles can confuse users and make the primary message's hard to understand.

Additionally, the contrast beneath the main call-to-action could be enhanced to ensure it encourages user interaction.

Overall, your idea for the landing page is promising, focusing on addressing users' needs and concerns effectively. :)


Your selection of words for both the subheading and button label is great! They effectively convey a value proposition and seem to align well with the brand image. The inclusion of the subtle note "no credit card required" is a clever touch. It reassures users that they can explore the app commitment-free for 15 days.

However, there are a couple of areas for improvement:

• The use of title case in the subheading seems slightly misaligned with the rest of the copy, which uses sentence case. This inconsistency can subtly disrupt the visual harmony and scannability.

• The contrast of the caption text beneath the button is not sufficient, making it difficult to read. Increasing the contrast would not only meet accessibility standards but also ensure that all users can easily understand everything on the page.

Aside from these suggestions, your work is excellent!


Nice work. Your heading is catchy and with clear CTA.


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