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Push Notification 1: Seasonal Specials

Title: Seasonal Specials

Body Text: Fall feast alert! 🍁 Pumpkin ravioli & more seasonal delights await. Explore now!

Effectiveness: The “Fall feast alert!” highlights seasonal favorites like “Pumpkin ravioli” and urges users to “Explore now!” for immediate action and engagement.

Push Notification 2: Shopping Reminder

Title: Shopping Reminder

Body Text: Don't forget your Coq au Vin ingredients! 🍷🥘 A magnifique dinner awaits tonight.

Effectiveness: Reminds users to pick up Coq au Vin ingredients, with “tonight” creating urgency and excitement for a special dinner.

Push Notification 3: Collection Recipes

Title: Add This Recipe to Your Collection

Body Text: Fallen for this pumpkin ravioli recipe? Save it to your collection with a quick tap!

Effectiveness: Encourages users to save the pumpkin ravioli recipe with one tap, making it easy to organize and revisit favorite recipes.

Push Notification 4: Pro Cooking Courses

Title: Cook Like A Pro

Body Text: Unlock your culinary potential with our pro cooking courses. Start learning today!

Effectiveness: Creates excitement for pro cooking courses and motivates users to start learning immediately, emphasizing skill improvement and immediate enrollment.

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This is so great! You're so very talented! Love the presentation aesthetic.

While emojis add personality & engagement, they can be problematic for accessibility (e.g., for screen readers and voices like Apple Siri, Amazon Alexa & Google Android) if not appropriately labeled. It's good to pair them with accessible descriptions or ensure that they don’t take priority over important information.

Seasonal Specials; consider being more specific in the message. Instead of just saying "dishes made for this time of year," perhaps mention a seasonal ingredient or dish to make the notification feel more personalized. Suggestion: "Celebrate fall with warm, seasonal recipes featuring pumpkin & cinnamon. Explore now!"

Shopping Reminder; The message could be even more impactful with the use of personalized data or ingredients the user has shown interest in previously. Personalization adds value and relevance. Suggestion: "Don’t forget to grab your fresh ingredients for tonight’s pasta recipe!"

Collection Recipes; The message could benefit from adding a specific example to personalize the experience. Also, the title "Save Time, Save Recipes" is a bit vague. Suggestion: "Love this fall recipe? Save it to your collection with just one tap!"

If you're not into writing, use Claude.ai or ChatGPT to coach yourself to improve your own microcopy. I did it to give you this feedback! I basically copy & pasted the sentences you'd written into ChatGPT and prompted that "I need help to improve this microcopy for Push Notification for E-Commerce Platform + {notification message}. And it spitted out tonnes of great suggestions.

Continue your awesome work!

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Thank you so much for your valuable feedback! Your suggestions had a big impact on the microcopy notifications. Your insights were incredibly helpful and have improved my work. I truly appreciate your guidance. I’ll be using tools like Claude.ai and ChatGPT to refine my skills. Your specific advice on each notification was spot-on and made a huge difference. Thanks again for your support and for helping me grow!

Great job on the push notifications

They are fun, clear, and engaging. I love how you use emojis to add personality. Each message feels inviting and makes users excited to take action.

Keep up the fantastic work

Thank you for the great feedback! I'm happy to hear the push notifications feel clear and engaging, and that the emojis add a nice touch. I appreciate your support!

Nice!


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