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1. New Arrivals: Exclusive Collection - Explore our latest collection of luxury pieces. Be the first to own these exquisite designs.

This notification creates excitement by showcasing new arrivals and emphasizing exclusivity. It taps into users' desire to stay ahead of trends and encourages immediate action. By using “exclusive,” I add a sense of luxury and value that appeals to them.

2. Final Hours: Exclusive Offer - Don’t miss out—enjoy 20% off select items before this exclusive offer ends tonight.

I use urgency here by highlighting that time is running out for the offer. This motivates users to act quickly and take advantage of the discount. By calling it “exclusive,” I make the offer feel special and valuable, which can drive more immediate purchases.

3. Curated Just for You!- Get personalized fashion picks for your style. Find your standout piece today.

Personalization is crucial for engagement. By telling users that Jing Lin has handpicked styles just for them, I make the content feel relevant and tailored to their tastes. It increases the likelihood that they’ll explore and purchase items that match their style.

4. VIP Preview: New Collection - Get early access to our newest collection. Shop the latest arrivals first.

Offering early access gives users a sense of privilege and exclusivity. By positioning them as VIPs, I foster a feeling of importance and reward, which can enhance their loyalty and prompt them to take advantage of their special status.

5. Expert Style Insights - Get exclusive style tips from our fashion experts for elegant inspiration and guidance.

Providing style tips adds value to the user experience. By offering expert advice, I position the brand as a trusted fashion force. This not only engages users but also encourages them to interact with additional content.

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Overall, good work! I appreciate the use of plain language and a concise yet informative tone. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

1. While we typically try to avoid exclamation points to prevent sounding too salesy, using them sparingly is acceptable. For instance, in "Find your next standout piece today!" it appears natural.

2. From a visual design perspective, I recommend increasing the letter spacing, as the letters currently appear too cramped, making the text difficult to read. If this leads to the message being too lengthy, consider using more concise words and making the message briefer.

3. It would also be beneficial to use a higher-quality image. When zooming in, whether on this platform or on Behance, the image becomes blurry, making it hard to read.

Anyway, thank you for your work!


I liked the synergy between the words and the logo. It created a sense of something refined for me.

I wished for more complex words to complete the overall impression, but I am not an expert nor the target audience, so I’m probably mistaken.

Overall, the impression is wonderful, thank you.

Thanks for your feedback, Dmytro!

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