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The headline is concise and acknowledges the delay with a touch of casual language, maintaining the brand's friendly tone. The use of emojis adds a playful element, keeping the message in line with Cosmic Beauty's trendy image. The body reassures users and suggests exploring the latest trends, redirecting their attention positively. The call-to-action button, "Explore Now," encourages users to engage with the app, providing a solution to their anticipation. Overall, the copy combines transparency, brand personality, and a clear call to action, making it effective for a push notification.

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Excellent work! You've chosen the tone and language for the copy perfectly, just as one might expect from an e-commerce brand.

Here are some areas for improvement:

  • Push notification messages allow fewer characters and are meant for mobile. Utilize the mobile templates to ensure your message fits well.
  • Test your copy with users to check if the language is too slangy or unclear to non-native speakers.

Other than that, great job!


First and foremost, I must commend you on your excellent work. Your copy is engaging but also concise and direct, effectively communicating the main points. You have put a great deal of effort into crafting the content.

However, there are a few minor areas that could be improved to enhance the overall quality of your project:

  • As mentioned in the project brief, it is essential to include 4-5 push notification messages from your app, each serving a distinct purpose. This variety in notifications will showcase the app's versatility and its ability to engage users in different ways.
  • Mobile Templates: To maintain consistency and adhere to the project guidelines, I recommend utilizing the mobile templates provided within the brief.

Despite these small adjustments, I want to reiterate that you have done a great job overall.

Keep up the fantastic work!

Best, Fedir)


Nice Work! The micro copy is effective and easy to understand with clean UI. Although, Like others have pointed out push notifications would have made more sense on a mobile. Besides that I think there are two areas which can be improved.

1. The description is a bit text heavy. Adding extra text just to sound witty is not necessary, It should be to the point and irrelevant information can be removed.

2. All the elements are left aligned but the button is at the center which feels imbalanced. It can be either pushed to the left or the width can be increased to match the text width.


Excellent Work !

The presentation is super clean.

Suggestion: The description could be a little shorter

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Good job on the push notification design!

A great start here Rufat well done! I can only agree with previous comments about adding push notifications and using a template to help you improve your ideas! keep it up!


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