Cosmic Beauty - Notifications

Your push notifications are designed thoughtfully and convey the message clearly, helping users understand the issue and what they can do about it. That said, tweaking the headlines to more directly reflect the problem could enhance clarity right off the bat. Another small note for improvement — be sure to proofread your work thoroughly. For instance, "in route" is used instead of "en route." A more conversational and accurate alternative could be "on the way." Great work on the whole, keep it up!

This is a wonderful project that you should absolutely add to your portfolio. Not only is it very well designed, but you clearly state your reasoning and rationale behind each and every decision.

Great job on the presentation (totally a portfolio material!) and the well-crafted texts for the push notifications! The tone is spot on. My only recommendation is to simplify the language and reduce the use of jargon, which might be confusing for non-native speakers. The simpler and more concise the notification message, the easier it is for users to understand at first glance.

Well done!

Stylish and just great:)