Delivery is running behind Notification

Thank you for the work you've done. The headline and microcopy in the notice are concise, clear, and easy to understand.

But there are a few things that could be improved in your work:

1) the assignment talks about 4-5 notifications

2) the design of the notification itself does not make it clear what platform the notification is implemented on, why a gray scale is chosen, and why the notification button is not contrasty at all. Try to pay attention to the implementation of notifications in Human Interface Guidelines for iOS or Material 3

Nice attempt, and it looks like you're getting the hang of it quite well!

I'll keep my feedback brief to give you room for experimentation and learning:

1. The title "Just a Touch Later" is a bit vague and doesn't clearly convey the message to the user. Consider simplifying it and providing a single piece of information, such as "Delivery on its way." You can then adjust this message to match the brand's tone of voice.
2. Remove the " . . . " dots or adjust the spacing, as they can make the copy appear less professional.
3. Consider whether the "Hey there!" greeting is necessary. Eliminating words or filler phrases like this can make the message easier to digest and quicker for users to access the information they're seeking.
4. You didn't follow the template mentioned in the brief. Although the main focus was to evaluate your UX copywriting skills, I didn't deduct points for this oversight. 😉

Keep up the good work!

Hi Michal,

Great job on your project so far! Your copy is concise, easy to understand, and effectively conveys the main points.

To further enhance your work, I have a few suggestions:

• As mentioned in the project brief, please create 4-5 push notification messages from your app, each serving a different purpose. This will demonstrate how your app engages users and keeps them informed about various aspects of the application.

• To better showcase your designs, utilize the provided mobile templates. This will give a clearer visual representation of how your app will look and function on mobile devices.

Your work so far is impressive, and I'm confident that incorporating these suggestions will elevate your project to the next level. Keep up the fantastic work, Michal!

Best, Fedir)