Lulu Lemon - Push Notification Copy

Hi Yuliia, Lulu Lemon doesn't actually have push notifications, so I had to make these up. But I really love your feedback and will now work on re-thinking some current app's push copy. Would love your feedback for that when I post it - I'll keep you updated. Thanks!

Hi Kelly. I see, in this case very good initiative in improving the user experience! I would suggested you to check out iOS and Android guidelines - it might be that they have a specific rules for the visual representation of the push notification. The UX copy looks good - concise and clear message. However, I would suggested to make it even more straight to the point. Sometimes "friendliness" is redundant and keep up more valuable space as it is suppose to, especially for push notifications. F.ex. "Thanks for your order" can become "Order is successful". "We are processing your order. We'll let you know when it's shipped" can become "It will take 1-2 days to process your order. When order is shipped, you will receive the estimated date" Please, check Chat GPT and Mobbin platform for more ideas and best practice. Have a good day, /Yuliia