Lulu Lemon - Push Notification Copy
Lululemon's brand is known for being friendly and relatable but not overly casual. I kept exclamation points to a minimum and copy straightforward but conversational.
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Great work, notifications copy is helpful and to the point. The length of both the headline and the body is just long enough to deliver the core message.
Hi Kelly, it looks like you put your time in ideation and re-thinking the copy.
However, without additional context and "before" screens it's hard to give a feedback. Please, update your case with more info, so everyone could give you a proper feedback.
/Yuliia
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Hi Yuliia, Lulu Lemon doesn't actually have push notifications, so I had to make these up. But I really love your feedback and will now work on re-thinking some current app's push copy. Would love your feedback for that when I post it - I'll keep you updated. Thanks!
Hi Kelly. I see, in this case very good initiative in improving the user experience!
I would suggested you to check out iOS and Android guidelines - it might be that they have a specific rules for the visual representation of the push notification.
The UX copy looks good - concise and clear message. However, I would suggested to make it even more straight to the point. Sometimes "friendliness" is redundant and keep up more valuable space as it is suppose to, especially for push notifications.
F.ex. "Thanks for your order" can become "Order is successful".
"We are processing your order. We'll let you know when it's shipped" can become "It will take 1-2 days to process your order. When order is shipped, you will receive the estimated date"
Please, check Chat GPT and Mobbin platform for more ideas and best practice.
Have a good day,
/Yuliia
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