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This landing page is for a fictional fashion brand called “BeYou”, providing comfortable and stylish clothing for diverse body size.

Design Rationale

Although inclusiveness and diversity has become common values in modern society, the term “fashion” still often links to models with perfect and slim body.
To break this stereotype, a fictional brand “BeYou” is created to advocate ”wear to be you”, helping everyone feels comfortable to be themselves in terms of wearing.

Design Process

  1. Research on existing major fashion brands to understand their value propositions.
  2. Create a fictional brand and define three core brand values:


- Perfect Fit for Every Body


- Empowering Confidence


- Commitment to Diversity and Inclusion

3. Design the layout of the landing page.

4. Craft the copywriting to match and deliver these values.

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The inclusivity in your work is outstanding—well done! However, I find the purpose of this landing page a bit unclear. It seems the CTA leads to a catalog, but is this catalog part of a separate website? If so, what is the goal of splitting them?

Generally, the landing page lacks an "About Us" section and maybe an FAQ. The absence of navigation is quite confusing, which might make users feel lost and question the viability of your website. If this website includes a catalog, then many essential elements are missing, such as a shopping cart, personal profile, return policy information, etc.

With these considerations, your landing page could be even more effective and user-friendly. Keep up the great work!

Hi Alesya, thanks for the valuable feedback! I've updated the landing page based on your suggestions: - Add "About BeYou" section - Add "Know More About BeYou" section - Adjust the CTA to make the navigation more clear Let me know if any further improvement can be made. Thank you!
Hey Jackie, I appreciate your effort and dedication. The About section is a nice addition. However, I'm curious why you chose not to add a navigation bar. Do you have a specific reason for this decision? Imagine arriving at a website and not seeing the primary sections at the top of the page, forcing you to scroll through the entire page to find what you need. Isn't that a bit confusing and somewhat like a dark pattern? From a visual perspective, I recommend choosing a more contrasting color for your CTAs. They are getting lost against the background, which uses the same color as the section background. Thank you for your hard work!
Hi Alesya, really appreciate your feedback! I think I might misundertand the elements need to be shown on a landing page. I thought that the landing page is for "conversion" only, which is to lead users to click and be directed to the shopping page, where the navigation will happen, in this case. This was why I did not make a nav bar in the first place. However, I did not realize this would cause something like dark pattern until seeing your feedback. Based on your suggestions, I've added the nav bar on the top right, as well as changing the color of CTA buttons. Your feedback helps me learn a lot, thank you very much!

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