Reviews
3 reviews
Love how you've tapped into the language and vibe of your target audience, pulling from commonly used words and popular fitness quotes. It makes the whole page feel super relatable and motivating. What’s really cool is how persuasive and actionable your copy is without coming across as too pushy. That’s a tough balance to strike, and you’ve done it beautifully.
I'd suggest to simplify the copy, make it a bit more concise. It will help with page readibility.
Very hard to review within current presentation. Please consider adding a reasoning into project description field, project link, and prepare a more suitable image as a project submisison.
A flask, common gym weights and apples; Common items typically associated with health and fitness. Although the primary purpose of the site and by extension the action it seeks to encourage or inspire is not clear.
Overall good layout design, although fairly common for websites (i.e 2 column layout with a big hero image on the right or left). Good type hierarchy, it is fairly easy to scan and identify the most important visual elements on the screen due to variability in font-size and font-weight. A fairly accessible UI, although, its black and white color scheme is typical for e-commerce websites and leaves a lot to be desired on the theme of "inspiration."
The copy in the main heading elicits questions rather than provides answers; This is important because it is one of the first elements would-be-customers (website visitors) would inspect to understand the value proposition offered.
Despite this, still a good UI.
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