Copywriting for 5-Minute Pilates
Fitness Platform: 5 Minute Pilates
Design Process:
1. Discover users’ needs
Secondhand research - User reviews on Apple App Store & Google Play
Apple App Store: 5.1K reviews, 4.7 stars https://apps.apple.com/us/app/5-minute-pilates-workout/id419981251?see-all=reviews
Google Play: 14.3K reviews, 4.6 stars https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=uk.co.olsonapps.fiveMinPilates&hl=en
2. Find insights from the current users:
- Current Pain Points
- Needs
- Comments (Positive and Negative)
- Motivation
3. Craft writings based on findings
Users' Pain Points:
- Lack of audio guidance for exercises.
- Limited variety and customization of exercises.
- Basic instructions that may not suffice for beginners, risking improper form and injury.
- Limited free content available, pushing users towards paid subscriptions quickly.
Users' Needs:
- Audio cues and detailed instructions for exercises.
- More comprehensive and varied exercise routines.
- Structured workout plans targeting different muscle groups.
- Additional features like warm-ups, cool-downs, and motivational notifications.
Design Rationale
1. The landing page is designed to address current user pain points and needs, which are:
- Provide sufficient free trial period (10 days, longer than the typical 7 days)
- Add audio guidance in videos, including free-versions -
- Provide clear labels for different-level exercises
- Add optional warm-up and cool down sessions
2. Enhance the user motivation, including:
- Easily fit into busy schedule
- More cost-effectiveness
- See and feel results in a rather short period of time
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Reviews
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Well done on identifying users' pain points and needs. However, your design solution doesn't seem to address these issues. For instance, you mention that users lack audio accompaniment in Pilates videos, but it's unclear how your interface addresses this need.
Additionally, since you submitted your work for a design brief focused on copywriting skills, there are some areas that need improvement. The text on the home page is too large, and more attention should be given to the hierarchy of typography. On a positive note, the CTA "Start My Free Workout" is very direct and clear—good job on that!
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