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The header's key elements work together to convey a clear message of pioneering spirit and groundbreaking achievement.

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Good job


Visually strong, the astronaut grabs attention. But the headline eats up too much space, and "Read more" is the weakest CTA possible – be specific about what you're offering. The bottom text is too small and probably unreadable on mobile. In my opinion layout balance is off – the left side overwhelms the right. Also missing: navigation for visual consistency and mobile version to evaluate responsiveness.

A good start but still requires many iterations and improvements. ✌️🫡


Looks interesting Mohamed. There is definitely something here, but a few things need more clarity.

I would really like to see the mobile version as well. One thing I would seriously reconsider is giving the CTA more strength. It feels too soft for a page that should push users toward action.

I would also like to see more details about the actual project. What is the purpose of this page. What can the user do here. What problem are you solving. Right now it is hard to understand the real function behind the visuals.

Since your description mentions "latest tech trends", I assume this might be some kind of blog or content driven page. If that is the case, you need to communicate that more clearly. Imagine visiting a news or blog portal and every single time being greeted with a fullscreen hero instead of the actual content. You would lose interest fast. But if this is supposed to be a landing page, then the fullscreen hero makes more sense.


Love the bold headline, clean split layout, and striking astronaut visual feels very dramatic and catches our focus instantly. Conversely, it reduces the importance of the CTA "Read More" and the body text could be a tad bit bigger. Overall good job!


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