Book Renting App – Onboarding Screens

Great job on creating a clean and engaging onboarding flow. The visuals feel friendly and approachable. A few things you could improve:

• The first screen doesn’t really explain what the app does. Try adding a short line or feature highlight to make that clear.
• The headings like “Rent,” “Read,” “Return” are nice, but the first screen only has a sentence. For consistency, you could add a heading there too (something like “Welcome” or “Why Us”).
• Screens 1 and 3 use the same image, switching one out would make the flow feel more varied.
• Spacing looks good overall, but the bottom section (text and button) could use a bit more breathing room so it doesn’t feel cramped on smaller screens.
• The characters on screens 2 and 4 look different (clothing colors, style). Keeping them consistent would make the design feel more polished.
• Adding a “Skip” option in the top-right is a common best practice. It gives users more control over the onboarding.
• On the last screen, “Next” feels a bit generic. Something like “Start” or “Get Started” would make it clearer that onboarding is done.
• The brief asks for a detailed explanation of your design decisions, which is missing right now. Adding that will make your submission stronger.

Overall, the foundation is solid, tighten up these details and it’ll look much more professional.