Velaré - Fashion website landing page

Francois, this Velaré is so elegant.

That said, I feel like there are a few disconnects between the brief and the actual design execution 🙂 I see you're using white space in some areas but what about the body text section?

A few suggestions from me:

• You might try aligning the header elements to a shared middle baseline, it would help balance the logo and navigation. Right now, the top margin feels just slightly off.

• A small nudge in font weight for the menu could help with readability! I know thin fonts often speak elegance, but there’s room to bargain with legibility especially if we're hoping users actually shop 😁

• The vertical spacing between the headline, body paragraph, and value props feels tight. In luxury design, space often communicates calm, elegance, and confidence and right now, the content feels a bit packed. Giving it more room to breathe might elevate the whole layout.

This looks great already. Would love to see the rest of the landing page from header to footer if you’re planning to share it!