MyBod

Good attempt on the copy, but it needs some work. Firstly, the headline is a bit confusing. Why is "be-come" written that way? That said, I do like the sentence "Become your best self with MyBod" as a title — good job there!

The body paragraph is hard to read. Consider using bullet points or shortening the sentences to make it more digestible. Also, the line before the CTA doesn’t need "by clicking here." You can keep it concise and still effective.

The CTA itself is nice and strong. Lastly, the submission could benefit from a rationale explaining your choices and approach.

Overall, you’re on the right track — just a few tweaks and it will be good to go!

The first impression is positive; I appreciate the black and white theme of the website. However, the large overlaying text block feels heavy and resembles a non-dismissible modal, which can be overwhelming. I agree with the previous comment about the text being too dense. The homepage should be more inviting and less text-heavy.

Regarding the login button, it is misspelled. As a verb, it should be 'Log In' or 'Log in.'

Also, the top navigation menu links are too varied. You should maintain a consistent pattern—either using verbs or nouns—to improve clarity and ease of navigation.

It's difficult to provide more detailed feedback since you haven't shared additional designs or explained your design decisions. Additionally, it would be interesting to hear the rationale behind the choice of a logo that depicts a scan code.