MECHABLAST - Typography System

Javier, your project shows great promise and it's clear you've put in a lot of hard work, especially with the meticulous presentation of typography. However, the small text size on a dark background makes it difficult to fully appreciate your work. Since Behance doesn’t allow resizing or maximizing content, the readability is further impacted. I suggest presenting your designs in a way that’s easier to view, as viewers might lose interest if they struggle to engage with your content.

Congrats on the Design Brief, you put a lot of effort for it.

Things I like:

1. The typeface reminds me the kind of text you can write with highlighter marker and I have done that many times and I like it.
2. It is simple yet sophisticated enough to fit in the topic for which it was created.
3. The presentation is worthy of admiration

Things I think could be improved

• Readability in my opinion is affected because of the similarity of the letters D, O and Q. In the example of: The Last Dream, from the behance brief, my mind continuously reads The Last Oream ... I know it doesn't make sense, then I understand.