Option Financial - affordable & flexible alternative to payday loans

As I mentioned in my previous review of your project, I have similar advice for this one. While you successfully present your product, there are areas where focusing on a balanced UI would enhance your design.

For example, on the first screen, the headline's font weight doesn't appear very visible. You might want to adjust it from extra light to regular and increase the size altogether.

Additionally, the second section, which seems to be a quote, doesn't align with modern WCAG guidelines. Increasing the font weight and adding vertical padding—I'd suggest 96px—will allow your sections to breathe and improve readability. p.s. to check if your design follows WCAG guidelines, there are numerous figma plugin to use. Just search in the plugin section and it will not only check whether you follow or not, it also give you suggestions, how to make them better.

Overall, you're doing a great job, and with these adjustments, your design will be even stronger.